Kia ora Leon, My name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms. Wow, you have done an excellent job creating this digital passport! I really like how you have included so many facts about yourself, and think that the images you have incorporated are fantastic! You mentioned how you have one cat and two dogs. What are your pets' names, and what do they look like? You also mentioned how you love swimming. What is it about swimming that you enjoy? When I was younger, swimming was an activity which I did most weekends. It was impossible to get me out of the water, and I would come up with any excuse I could to stay in as long as possible. I see you have an image from Pokemon as your background. Do you play Pokemon often, and is this your favourite character? Quick Tip- When uploading this image to your blog you have cut off the left side of your digital passport. It would be great if you could edit this post and make the image smaller so the entirety of your passport fits on the screen.
I can also see that you have included your birthday in this blogpost. Although this digital passport is all about you, it is important to be careful with your personal information when you are posting online. Could you please edit your blogpost and remove your birthday.
We had to do a digital passport for our principal so she could learn more about us all.
Kia ora Leon,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms.
Wow, you have done an excellent job creating this digital passport! I really like how you have included so many facts about yourself, and think that the images you have incorporated are fantastic!
You mentioned how you have one cat and two dogs. What are your pets' names, and what do they look like?
You also mentioned how you love swimming. What is it about swimming that you enjoy?
When I was younger, swimming was an activity which I did most weekends. It was impossible to get me out of the water, and I would come up with any excuse I could to stay in as long as possible.
I see you have an image from Pokemon as your background. Do you play Pokemon often, and is this your favourite character?
Quick Tip- When uploading this image to your blog you have cut off the left side of your digital passport. It would be great if you could edit this post and make the image smaller so the entirety of your passport fits on the screen.
I can also see that you have included your birthday in this blogpost. Although this digital passport is all about you, it is important to be careful with your personal information when you are posting online. Could you please edit your blogpost and remove your birthday.
Keep up the great work!
Nga mihi