Wow, what a great argument you have made here for logging in New Zealand. I like that you have made some really clear points to support your argument as well. Next time if you want to add some extra strength to your argument you can add some facts and figures to help support what you are saying - this will also make it harder to disagree with your points.
I like that you have thought about the effect it would have on the people who would loose their jobs if we stopped logging and also the different things we use wood for that we may no longer be able to have. Do you think there might be a solution to these problems? Maybe we could make a new material?
I really like your final point too, making sure that if we are to continue logging we need to make sure we are replanting the trees too.
Great work on this activity Leon - you have really strong points! Keep up the awesome work!
Hi Leon!
ReplyDeleteWow, what a great argument you have made here for logging in New Zealand.
I like that you have made some really clear points to support your argument as well. Next time if you want to add some extra strength to your argument you can add some facts and figures to help support what you are saying - this will also make it harder to disagree with your points.
I like that you have thought about the effect it would have on the people who would loose their jobs if we stopped logging and also the different things we use wood for that we may no longer be able to have.
Do you think there might be a solution to these problems? Maybe we could make a new material?
I really like your final point too, making sure that if we are to continue logging we need to make sure we are replanting the trees too.
Great work on this activity Leon - you have really strong points!
Keep up the awesome work!
Ellee :)